Hi, my name Pheata. I'm student in ACE. I like swimming and playing badminton staying at home was very boring to me.
In my free time I like listen to music and play some computer game. I like all kind of music especially K-pop. My favorite band is 2pm, they all really awesome and cool.
I want to improve my write during blog and hope everyone write blog thinks like me.
Hi Pheata you post look great. :) However, you had created some mistake. Let's me check it for you. :)
ReplyDeleteyou wrote "In my free time I like listen to music and play some computer game."
It should be "In my free time I like listen to music and play some computer games."
And here more hmmmm you also wrote " I want to improve my write during blog and hope everyone write blog thinks like me."
That should be " I want to improve my writing during blog and hoping everyone that write blogs thinks like me."
I know that I am not a teacher to check your work, but I am your friend to check what you had done wrong to become right. Thank for reading my comment. :-)